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What do you think of the story? I haven't been typing it for a while, due to the fact that I've been playing lots of video games.
I think the story is good, but you could do better. You state the obvious too much, so you should try to put in each detail more subtly(okay, that word sounded wrong). And give name a few distinctive facial features, like if they have a hooked nose or a big forehead XD And uh, that's about all I can think of.
Part of my style is sometimes stating the obvious though, so sometimes I wonder if that's a fault.
I agree, the characters really need to be developed more.